I read it, but I come tomorrow to comment, I am too tired right now, and I want to comment properly. <3
So here I am. :D
Oh god, I so loved the end of the story. I knew it must have been Ueda or I was also thinking about Yuu. Someone who really is into the family of Ryo and Jin. Maybe Uchi would have been an option, but .... it's Uchi after all. *lol*
Ryo and Jin really made a big step forward here. I loved that you don't solved everything at the end, because it's not realistic that everything is solved, especially because their problem wasn't about Ryo being late at home or something like this. I really can imagine Ryo teasing Jin with this father thing afterwards. ^^ He has the lead here, right? And Jin will give in everytime Ryo calls him Daddy. ^^ I can totally imagine that.
Oh god, Yuu. ^^ He is the perfect mum. He is so caring and his cooking skills and his care. <3 I am totally in for that. He is a real big help for the others here, because who would cook for Ryo when there wouldn't be Yuu around?! Jin? No way....
Oh, Jin and Kame's talk in bed was so sweet and funny. ^^ No talk about cases or Kame's father. *lol* They really managed it to be together till the end, it's totally cool that the Ryo-thing wasn't a reason for them to break up.
It's so sad how Kame visits his mother at the end of the story. It's hard that she didn't recognize him, but it's so realistic. And I think Kame can bear with it, even though she doesn't know him at all.
Ueda and Kame built up their own family here. It's nice to see that Kame finally founds a part of his family, and someone who won't push him away.
I guess we talked about it today: but what happens when Yuu finds his love?! Will the one move in with the rest. *lol* Sorry, I so loved Yuu's part in this story. ^^
The end was perfect, really. It wasn't perfect for the characters, but for the reader. It's only normal that there can't be everything alright in the end, but it totally fit like you wrote it.
They have to work on their problems and it will take some time, but they will manage it. <3
Thanks soooo much for writing this story, I totally loved every piece of it.
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So here I am. :D
Oh god, I so loved the end of the story. I knew it must have been Ueda or I was also thinking about Yuu. Someone who really is into the family of Ryo and Jin. Maybe Uchi would have been an option, but .... it's Uchi after all. *lol*
Ryo and Jin really made a big step forward here. I loved that you don't solved everything at the end, because it's not realistic that everything is solved, especially because their problem wasn't about Ryo being late at home or something like this.
I really can imagine Ryo teasing Jin with this father thing afterwards. ^^ He has the lead here, right? And Jin will give in everytime Ryo calls him Daddy. ^^ I can totally imagine that.
Oh god, Yuu. ^^ He is the perfect mum. He is so caring and his cooking skills and his care. <3 I am totally in for that. He is a real big help for the others here, because who would cook for Ryo when there wouldn't be Yuu around?! Jin? No way....
Oh, Jin and Kame's talk in bed was so sweet and funny. ^^ No talk about cases or Kame's father. *lol* They really managed it to be together till the end, it's totally cool that the Ryo-thing wasn't a reason for them to break up.
It's so sad how Kame visits his mother at the end of the story. It's hard that she didn't recognize him, but it's so realistic. And I think Kame can bear with it, even though she doesn't know him at all.
Ueda and Kame built up their own family here. It's nice to see that Kame finally founds a part of his family, and someone who won't push him away.
I guess we talked about it today: but what happens when Yuu finds his love?! Will the one move in with the rest. *lol* Sorry, I so loved Yuu's part in this story. ^^
The end was perfect, really. It wasn't perfect for the characters, but for the reader. It's only normal that there can't be everything alright in the end, but it totally fit like you wrote it.
They have to work on their problems and it will take some time, but they will manage it. <3
Thanks soooo much for writing this story, I totally loved every piece of it.
*hugs* *hearts*