Date: 2012-08-26 04:28 am (UTC)
Here I am :D

Thank you for the update. It came at exactly the right time. I think you must know how much that means to me.

I am glad for the interaction between Kame and his father. My parents' actions were often a mystery to me and I see that Kame is sharing in that feeling. But to Kame's father it must seem that Kame is interacting with the world more. It is strange what impresses parents, sometimes I feel like they just want to see their children be self sustaining.

Yoko and Ryo--my favorite line of the chapter is "without you the world would be totally empty." Sometimes i think that Yoko needs Ryo more or just as much as Ryo needs Yoko.

And Kame he is getting bold--going back to the orphanage. Yoko asking him to look after Ryo was sweet--as if Kame can stop himself now. I like the contrast--Kame looking at the ocean in this chapter as compared to the beginning.

I think what I like best so far is that for Kame and Ryo, this is about the two of them learning how to trust themselves, even as they learn to break down their walls as they reach out for each other.

I love it so much. Thanks again for this. Hugs to you my friend, :D
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