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Date: 2012-09-29 09:15 am (UTC)1. First of all, I LOVE YOUR BRAINS and the ideas...I said that already? I KNOW, I love it that much :D Arashi in a pirate ship AS PIRATES? Moving island turned giant octopus? SOLD.
2. Second, your sense of humor: Something about Cucumber not being delicious when cooked, Jun and the hotness warning, and a whole other things cracks me up hard XD
3. Third, I love how you put the scenes in list forms and chronologically arranges them (like when there is the time element in the beginning) ♥ It just effectively depicts picture without being wordy. I also loved how you inserted Ohno's observation despite being in danger in those list forms too. It reminds the readers that the whole journey is not just about adventure but the sea adventure but also depicts a love story.
AND THAT'S JUST THE GENERAL PART :D
Individually,
1. Ohno and his sense of adventure and even the surprising revelation
2. Jun and his Queen Matsumoto ship (you don't know how amused I am by this naming) also, Jun as a Prince of Atlantis? SO APPROPRIATE :D
3. Sho and his intelligent self (and even his brother complex which is borderline incest feelings for Jun) it's perfect!
4. Aiba not knowing to swim (and cook, but we already know that) and Nino not feeling seasick in the most important times THANK GOODNESS
5. CUCUMBER! Who is not in the least adorable but is there because he's a damn key! XD
I wish there was...
1. More Aiba and Nino screen time or at least development of characters (but all is understood when I learned that they were from the same...place, for the lack of better word, anyway.
2. A romantic side-pairing! (although its totally not needed) It's just my personal preference XD
On a oh-so-bright side:
This story is something that I couldn't have imagined (and I also didn't know its possible for a fic) so good job on this! People might dismiss it due to length at first but all is well when you started reading.
PLUS: Sexytimez! I generally thought that this should be a PG but it didn't get awkward when it get to that. It's short and they were practically cock-blocked by skeletons and ghosts but it was kjl;ajdfjka; AMAZING
If I may suggest...
If you were planning to expand this world into more (and don't be pressured if you don't want to since I myself hate doing sequels), you could probably center on one of Sho, Aiba or Nino and see the world of adventure through their eyes and more? Or if you just want an accompanying fic, that Juntoshi's interrupted sexy scene continuation would be enough too: set on beautiful Atlantis XD
BUT NO PRESSURE! I love this fic the way it is and would love whatever it is that you will decide (sequel or not) but saw a comment hinting on a sequel and wanted to suggest something. XD
YOU ARE AWESOME. And I am now perpetually scared of fic exchanges now because all I see are good fics.
what have I gotten myself intoIt's that awesome. Keep the crazy ideas coming! ♥