Date: 2012-10-04 07:54 am (UTC)
Well i already commented on this fic, but i just read it again. What i really like is the gentle roller coaster my own emotions go on when reading--like i have butterflies in my belly. I don't think I said this before but i love the steps and the intros to each part--and the beautiful things you use to compare to each step. My favorite is step 2: " Falling in love: Like a summer breeze brushing through your hair, like a butterfly touching your cheek, like fresh-made cupcakes with strawberry flavor".

Also Van Gogh=my <3--so bonus points for that.

The pace is wonderful, and all the words beautiful. i love this fic so much I am printing it out and keeping it forever--so I can hold it in my hands. Even when you were anon--I knew it was you--because who else could write this amazing fic. Thanks again and again. :D
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