Date: 2017-12-30 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] harunomasu
I think that this is my fave Juntoshi fic. Like, ever.

I usually don't like story about jealousy, because they always lead to something bad, but damn, you make it sound so beautiful. I could see why Ohno is overly protective and overly jealous about everyone around Jun (even with the other Arashi members), because Jun is Jun, being his pretty and amazing self. I would get overly jealous too if I have him as my partner. I might even do worse lol

I love that it's not an instant reconciliation for both of them. Both Ohno and Jun need to work together to make their relationship truly WORK, because it's all about them after all. Ohno could be a little jealous (it's hard not to be, really, when you have awesome partner like Jun), and Jun should be the one to tell him that he didn't need to feel jealous at all

I rarely read Juntoshi, and almost definitely never comment on Juntoshi fics, but yours is just different. This is terrific, a masterpiece, and I would seriously love to see this expand to a chaptered fic though, since I think that there are rooms for this to grow :D (or maybe that's just me because I seriously love this one haha)
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