chotto matte! before anything else, are you sure that there are only 2 chapters left? i feel like it's not enough to close the story :| :| :| omg i want more that it hurts.
okay okay. i think this chapter is the best one, to date. i love the approach of your writing at the first part. it's perfect and amazing. yoko being worried sick and ryo being hurt and angry. that was just portrayed perfectly. i seriously felt a bit nervous while reading it, fearing that ryo might do something else. good thing that yoko was able to calm him down.
so some 'two years ago' was mentioned. i wonder what kind of past ryo really has. i still don't know why he is in the orphanage, and why he chose the place after all.
yoko is such as caring brother. i would love to have a bothersome yet sincere brother like him. i couldn't help but smile when he and ryo were saying good things about each other. it was really sweet and thoughtful. yoko's really awesome and he's the only saving grace for ryo being stuck at the orphanage.
oops, my bad. ryo's leaving the orphanage because he's going to finally live with his brother. that sounds even more perfect! they will sure get on each other's nerves most of the time but they love each other so I'm sure there will be no other problem. Somehow, YokoRyo is trying to compete with my RyoJin!brothers. (I need a new RyoJin!)
i was sure ryo would be hurt and insecure because of what kame did. but i'm glad that he, in the end, understood kame, too. that wil help kame in getting ryo's trust again. although sometimes, your own pain is not a ticket to hurt others, i know that ryo will forgive kame. after all, they're just the same. they both shut people out of their life and never open up.
i wonder about the conversation on the notebook. i am getting an idea about its relevance to (maybe) the last chapter but I'll just wait until we get there. i wonder if the twist was kame breaking up with ryo all of a sudden or there is more. i'll be wiating!
kame's pitiful because he lost his mother through suicide. it hurts more, right. i know he's thinking that he's not enough for his mother to fight for her life even with struggles and problems. but it's still a good point that instead of having more conflict with his dad, they are going to try to make things better. it's the least thing that they could do to move on faster.
now that kame realized what he's done to ryo, i hope he talks to him soon- to not lost another important person in his life.
ryo and yoko aren't leaving the town, anyway, right?
okay i think i was pretty carried away in this chapter. i hope you update soon cause i just can't get enough of this!
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okay okay. i think this chapter is the best one, to date. i love the approach of your writing at the first part. it's perfect and amazing. yoko being worried sick and ryo being hurt and angry. that was just portrayed perfectly. i seriously felt a bit nervous while reading it, fearing that ryo might do something else. good thing that yoko was able to calm him down.
so some 'two years ago' was mentioned. i wonder what kind of past ryo really has. i still don't know why he is in the orphanage, and why he chose the place after all.
yoko is such as caring brother. i would love to have a bothersome yet sincere brother like him. i couldn't help but smile when he and ryo were saying good things about each other. it was really sweet and thoughtful. yoko's really awesome and he's the only saving grace for ryo being stuck at the orphanage.
oops, my bad. ryo's leaving the orphanage because he's going to finally live with his brother. that sounds even more perfect! they will sure get on each other's nerves most of the time but they love each other so I'm sure there will be no other problem. Somehow, YokoRyo is trying to compete with my RyoJin!brothers. (I need a new RyoJin!)
i was sure ryo would be hurt and insecure because of what kame did. but i'm glad that he, in the end, understood kame, too. that wil help kame in getting ryo's trust again. although sometimes, your own pain is not a ticket to hurt others, i know that ryo will forgive kame. after all, they're just the same. they both shut people out of their life and never open up.
i wonder about the conversation on the notebook. i am getting an idea about its relevance to (maybe) the last chapter but I'll just wait until we get there. i wonder if the twist was kame breaking up with ryo all of a sudden or there is more. i'll be wiating!
kame's pitiful because he lost his mother through suicide. it hurts more, right. i know he's thinking that he's not enough for his mother to fight for her life even with struggles and problems. but it's still a good point that instead of having more conflict with his dad, they are going to try to make things better. it's the least thing that they could do to move on faster.
now that kame realized what he's done to ryo, i hope he talks to him soon- to not lost another important person in his life.
ryo and yoko aren't leaving the town, anyway, right?
okay i think i was pretty carried away in this chapter. i hope you update soon cause i just can't get enough of this!
*hugs and thanks for this chapter*