Ah i can't believe there is only one more chapter to go, but quite alot happens in this one.
i think it was incredibly beautiful that Ryo went to the funeral even though he could not stand with Kame. They are really hard and it must have brought up feelings for Ryo about his own family.
I knew that Ryo would fight for Kame, and he does it on his own terms. I like the way you write this Ryo, because even if I think I am expecting a certain level of intensity from him, he always surprises me. i think it is because his emotions were so bottled up for so long (or they came out in tantrums directed at Yoko) that now because he has a desired goal (Kame) he has to channel them--use them more effectively.
Kame, I think is taken surprise by it as well. i think he is surprised that Ryo is holding him accountable for his actions, and i like that alot. Especially here: “This doesn’t mean you are forgiven!” Kame is still on the hook, precisely because Ryo won't give up on him.
i really enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much<3
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i think it was incredibly beautiful that Ryo went to the funeral even though he could not stand with Kame. They are really hard and it must have brought up feelings for Ryo about his own family.
I knew that Ryo would fight for Kame, and he does it on his own terms. I like the way you write this Ryo, because even if I think I am expecting a certain level of intensity from him, he always surprises me. i think it is because his emotions were so bottled up for so long (or they came out in tantrums directed at Yoko) that now because he has a desired goal (Kame) he has to channel them--use them more effectively.
Kame, I think is taken surprise by it as well. i think he is surprised that Ryo is holding him accountable for his actions, and i like that alot. Especially here: “This doesn’t mean you are forgiven!”
Kame is still on the hook, precisely because Ryo won't give up on him.
i really enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much<3