I think it is so hard to see someone we love be worn down and tired, especially from working so hard. Shingo is not delicate with his words,but he really is only concerned about Kimura. I really like the POV and I like that their relationship is complicated--and that you show how the band interacts. I don't know much about SMAP but I love a good hurt/comfort one shot. Well Done😀. Hugs to you!