You know I am not really into SubaRyo, but I really enjoyed reading your story.

They really don't need much to say, but it just works out between them. They have many things in common, but they aren't totally same, I think that makes it work (does that make any sense?)

I loved the scene with the guitar, it's a real nice image for me :)

So, thanks for sharing. I really liked it

Just one thing more to say:  expecto patronum
;)