http://yoru-no-hikaru.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yoru-no-hikaru.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] yume_to_ame 2015-10-05 07:42 pm (UTC)

AWWWWWWWWWW, sweetness!!!!! (∩ˊᵕˋ∩)・*
This is a really cool interpretation. I like how wary and (very realistically) inexperienced Fuma is. It's like he can't really name the feelings he's having. And the "Marshmallow" was so XD It suggests how fluffy Fuma really, taking care of his kouhai, but still holding back, when it's about taking responsibility. The way Fuma wants to be all grown up, but ultimately falls prey to his young age is immensely entertaining. The way he fears he might not be a skilled kisser got me.


Takaki's my secret hero of the story. (o^^o) His randomness is just downright awesome.


Poor Kento keeps waiting to be swept off his feet. It's funny, really. I imagine him being very romantic, thinking up stuff and everything (I can imagine him writing fanfiction, actually XD) and also having big expectations when it comes to possible romantic partners. He's also being a bit of a girl, trying to make Fuma jealous. It's still cute, though. He tries to get Fuma to make the first move, but when that move won't come and he by chance loses the groubd under his feet he just re-assesses his approach and finally goes for gold.


It's a lovely story, thank you so much for the fluffiness!!! (♡´ ˘ `♡)


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