Date: 2016-01-23 10:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] learashi
Yes, Jun's POV is depressing, but it is kind of where he is emotionally at the moment. At least his close friends have remained loyal and look out for him. I like the way you give us further hints about happenings in the past (like Jun almost freaking out in the car) without spelling them out.
It was wonderful that he was able to interact with Sho in a good way for once, but I guess that will go out the window when Sho finds out about the rumor.
Kazu is worrying me more at the moment though...
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