Date: 2017-07-14 06:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] leiva21
I love how this story with complicated, angsty, mysterious story line ended in happy note. Jun and Sho's relationship by the end of the story has found their strength and with Sho's support, Jun can and will move on.
I'm here crying because you wrote that part where they wrote words on their palms. I love it a lot as much as I like it when you wrote the scene in the earlier chapter. It feels like how much they've grown as a couple.
All the characters have their own strength and it was great to see that Shun apologizes to Jun, and Toma found a new job with Aiba, and Satoshi being available for Sho and Jun, and also Nino too. You've wrapped up all characters and the story pretty nicely.
Okay I just have one question, is Yuki, Jun's real name, in the end? It seems like Jun is sticking with Jun and of course if they started calling him Yuki it might feel strange lols.

Finally, thank you for this excellent story! Love love this a lot!

So for your next project, I'm not picky since I'm already happy that you always manage to update a story every week, and I love every Jun-centric stories you've posted and will be posted in the future. I'm looking forward for your next one!
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