Wow, I totally loved that story. <3 I am really, really picky with humor, but this slight ironic and just fantastic humor was brilliant.

All the parts where you numbered things were just great. *lol* I totally loved Aiba here, poor boy. He is a bit .... stupid, but in a loveable, clumsy way. :D

The idea with the more or less useless crew was just perfect. ^^ Nino and Aiba at the top. :DDDD Poor Nino, he is always seasick. ^^

Oh, the dog is just great. It's so ... ugly. ^^

I totally loved the whole solution for it. THe things with the slight magic, or fantasy part. I totally loved that.
I also loved it that Ohno is also a part of them. ^^


Thanks sooo much for that story, I really loved it and all the ideas you had here. :)

*hugs*