http://koi-choshi.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] koi-choshi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] yume_to_ame 2016-11-21 01:57 am (UTC)

Ahhh I've been waiting for this *rolls*

I was pleasantly surprised at the length of this chapter! Toshida is so great and so cute when he suddenly shifts his behavior when talking to either Jun or Sho. I'm glad that they're now more open to each other. And it's nice to hear Jun's thoughts about the mind games thing (thanks to Toshida being so cool and all).

I wonder if the family dinner shows up here... and the vacation with only the two of them *wriggles eyebrows*

Interestingly, this chapter also made me realize that the whole story is really in Jun's POV. That we cannot really see Sho's thoughts unless Jun hears it. I like it this way. :3 Thanks for this!

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